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• Rocío Romero Hinojosa

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Every country in the world has problems with pollution and damage to the environment. Do you think these problems can be solved? NOTES: 1.Transport 2.Rivers and seas 3.Your own idea. In current society, not only countries are countries being affected by economic issues, but also the vast majority of them are also involved in many troubles such as global warming, the greenhouse effect or air pollution. Even though governments are strongly striving for to dealing with these sorts of problems, they are not being able to make reach an agreement to overcome it as everyone has expected. In regard to the solutions, countries ought to come up with ideas against private transport with the purpose of significantly cutting down significantly the amount of fumes given off by cars. Besides, although every day more and more electric cars are being placed on the market in order to reduce gases, we are not still aware of the problem caused by pollution to ourselves and the environment as we are stuck in our traditional ways of living. Moreover, some people think we should keep an eye on rivers and seas around the world with the aim of cleaning them up as quickly as possible. From my point of view, many companies dump litter every single day into rivers every single day so they are destroying our ecosystem and this is the main reason why we have to be capable of quitting these actions for the sake of next generations. In a nutshell, I´d rather think that we truly could solve the problem providing kids and youngsters with a better education about the this issue, and surprisingly enough, the best way to learn would be teaching by example without any doubt. NOTAS: 1. El writing está muy bien para un nivel B2, tanto en cuestión gramatical como en vocabulario. 2. Aspectos a mejorar: 

Te aconsejo que leas el tema de las inversiones para saber cómo utilizar not only: http://lawebdelingles.com/nivel-b2/inversiones-en-ingles.

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Trouble es un sustantivo incontable en inglés, por tanto, no puede llevar s de plural ni tampoco many (es para contable).

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The greenhouse effect lleva artículo the, porque es específico.

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Strive va seguido de for cuando tenemos detrás un sustantivo, pero de to infinitivo si tenemos un verbo.

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Sort y kind van en plural cuando delante ponemos these, tiene que haber concordancia entre estas dos palabras y el artículo, por tanto, these sorts y these kinds.

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Llegar a un acuerdo = reach an agreement

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More and more = cada vez/cada día más = no hace falta poner every day.

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The environment = lleva artículo the = es específico (sólo hay uno)

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Dump litter into a place = preposición into = la preposición into se utiliza cuando es dentro, como in, pero siempre que haya movimiento. En este caso, el verbo dump implica movimiento.

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Provide somebody with something = necesitamos la preposición with, aunque en español no la utilicemos.

3. Cosas buenas que le dan calidad al writing: 

Vocabulary:

Strive Overcome Come up with an idea Be aware of Be stuck in Keep an eye on Dump litter For the sake of Connectors/ linkers: even though, as, besides, moreover, in order to, in regar to, from my point of view, in a nutshell, surprisingly enough. 

Grammar:

Passives: are being affected by (present continuous), are being placed (present continuous) Good variety of tenses: present simple, present continuous, present perfect simple

Ought to ‘d rather + infinitive without to Preposition + verb in ing Have to + infinitive Would be = conditional