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WRITING UNIT 1 PART 3 You are a member of PERFECT AU PAIR website and you are in the chat room. You are talking to Jane, the mother of a family who is considering hosting you as their au pair. Talk to Jane using complete sentences. Use 30 to 40 words per answer. You have 10 minutes.

PART 1 Fill in the form (3 minutes) PERFECT AU PAIR – REGISTRATION FORM Username Date of Birth (day month year) City / Town / Village [Mobile number]

Juan Pérez

Jane: Hi! I find your profile quite interesting. Why are you interested in working as an au pair?

03rd July 1990

You: Hello Jane Londres 695377799

Comentado [1]: London (tienes que escribir TODO en inglés)

Nice to meet you! Because I would like to improve my level of English. I also find the experience of living in another country interesting. I think that working as an aupair is an easy and safe way to have work and accommodation insured.

House: mark [Delivery address]

Street: cable street State: United Kingdom

Jane: Oh, I see! Have you had a look at our profile as a host family? Would you like to work for us? You: yes, I would, because I have been talking to a friend who was working with you and my friend told me that you are a very good person

PART 2 You have joined the ‘PERFECT AU PAIR’ service. Fill in the form with complete sentences. Use 20-30 words. You have 7 minutes. MEMBER FORM Please tell us about your own family and / or the people you live with.

Jane: I can only offer you a salary of £70 per week, but you won’t have food expenses. How do you feel about it? You: I would love to earn 20 pounds more per week, because the standard price of living in this city is very expensive, but for my first job it's fine.

At the moment, I live sharing a flat with two people from Malaga and a pet in Cadiz, but I normally live with my parents and my brother in Cordoba.

PART 4 You are a member of the ‘PERFECT AU PAIR’ service. On your last visit to their website you saw a private message from a host family.

Dear au pair,

Now, write an email to the host family who sent you that private message, explaining your feelings about the change and suggesting possible alternatives. Write about 120150 words. You have 20 minutes.

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing in relation with the previous e-mail and I want to show you my disagreement about the decrease of 10% of my working salary to take effect from next week.

I am sorry to inform you that we won’t be able to keep your £70/week salary due to recent financial problems. For this reason we have found ourselves forced to reduce it a 10%. We feel so sorry about it and will appreciate your comprehension.

Kind regards, Jane

I have been working with you for three weeks and I feel It is unacceptable to decrease my salary so soon after signing up. I think you should rethink the my salary decrease If I am not doing my job very well.

I would like to suggest several alternatives: 1. First of all, personally I believe that If you have to decrease my salary, you should reduce my working hours. 2. Secondly, If you do not want to reduce my working hours, I would love you to pay me monthly

Write an e-mail to friend who also uses the ‘PERFECT AU PAIR’ service. Write your feelings about the message you received and suggest possible alternatives. Write about 50 words. You have 10 minutes.

a transport card to be able to travel around the city.

I look forward to hearing back from you If my recommendation is acceptable if not, I will look at other

Hello Sara, What do you think about the decrease of 10% of my working salary? I can’t believe they are going to lower my salary and work the same hours. If you ask me, the family should offer me fewer hours of work if they plan to pay less. I just signing up and already a decrease of my salary.

job offers.

Juan

Yours faithfully.

Thank you for your attention.

Juan

Comentado [2]: Me gusta mucho cómo lo has esrito. ¡Sigue así! :D

WRITING UNIT 4 PART 1 Fill in the form. You have 3 minutes.

PART 3 You are a member of MEALS DELIVERY ONLINE website and you are in the chat room. Talk to Mike using complete sentences. Use 30 – 40 words per answer. You have ten

ORDER MEALS ONLINE – REGISTRATION FORM Username Date of Birth (day month year) City / Town / Village [Mobile number]

minutes.

Juan Pérez 3rd July1990 Malaga

Mike: Hi! I see you’re new here. I joined a year ago after I started living alone. Why did you join?

623377709

You: Hello Mike, nice to meet you, on the one hand, I joined here to meet other House: John [Delivery address]

types of food that exist in the world, on the other hand, I love ordering food online.

Street: 221B Cable Street State: Malaga

Mike: What do you think about the service? You: In my point of view, the service is very good, the restaurant staff are very PART 2 You’ve joined the ‘ORDER MEALS ONLINE’ site. Fill in the form. Write in sentences using 20 – 30 words. You have 7 minutes. MEMBER FORM Please tell us about your favourite food and time when you prefer to have

friendly and the service provides you with everything you need, but there is one thing I don’t like: these are the dishes.

Mike: How do you feel about the recent rise in the price of pizzas? It was 20% cheaper before.

your meals.

I don’t have a favourite food, but I like to eat healthy food such as vegetables, fish, meat. I prefer to eat at 3 o'clock at 1 o'clock as the English do.

You: I really feel annoyed because I often went to eat pizza with my friends on Saturdays but now with the price increase of the pizza we will be able to go only at once a month.

Now write an email to the Customer Service Team, explaining your feelings about the notice and suggesting possible alternatives. Write 120150 words. You have 20 minutes.

PART 4 You are a member of ‘MEALS DELIVERY ONLINE’. On your last visit to their website you saw the notice below.

Dear Sir or Madam, Dear valued customers,

I am writing in relation with the previous e-mail and I want to show you my disagreement about the increase of 10% of a fee for the meals order to take effect from next week.

We are sorry to inform you that from next month we have to introduce a fee for the meals’ delivery. It will constitute 10% of the meal order. We have to introduce this measure to reduce the high costs involved in delivering the meals.

I feel It is unacceptable the increase of 10% of a fee for the meals order. I think you should rethink the fee increase if you are withdrawing services.

If you have any comments or suggestions, please feel free

I would like to suggest several alternatives: 1. First of all, I believe that If there is an increase of a fee for the meals order, you should have some offers in the menus. 2. As a second alternative, it would be very interesting for customers to give away some starters or bottle of wine

to email us at [email protected].

I look to forward hearing back from you If my recommendation are acceptable if not, I will look at other restaurants offers.

Write an email to a friend who also uses the MEALS DELIVERY ONLINE service. Write your feelings about the notice and suggest possible alternatives. Write about 50 words. You have 10 minutes.

Thank you for your attention.

Hello Olga,

Yours faithfully. what do you think about the fee increase the meals delivery for the meals’ delivery? I can’t believe they are increasing the fee. If you ask me the food prices should be cheaper if the price of the fee increase the meals delivery for the meals’ delivery. I had in mind next month and already a fee increase! Juan

Comentado [1]: repetición

Juan

Comentado [2]: evítalo, lo repites demasiado

You are a new student in the ‘Conversational German Course’ and you are in the chat room. You are talking to Heather, an old student in this course. Talk to her using complete sentences. Use 30 to 40 words per answer. You have 10 minutes.

WRITING UNIT 6 PART 1 Fill in the form (3 minutes)

Heather: Hello! Are you a new student? I started three months ago because I want to go to work in Germany. Why are you studying German?

CONVERSATIONAL GERMAN COURSE - REGISTRATION FORM Username Date of Birth (day month year)

Juan Antonio Morales

You: Hello Heather. Nice to meet you. I have decided to learn Germany because I need

03rd July 1990

to get the certificate to get into university. However, I don’t really like learning this

City / Town / Village

Malaga

[First language]

Spanish

language. I would prefer study English.

Comentado [2]: to study English

Heather: What do you think about the course? 1. I like it.

You: On the one hand, I believe that the course is too well because the teacher [Reasons for studying German]

2. I need it for my job.

teaches very well and we are three people in the class but on the other hand I think

3. Interesting.

teacher isn’t natives.

Comentado [3]: the teacher isn't native

PART 2 You have enrolled in the ‘Conversational German Course’. Fill in the form with complete sentences. Use 20-30 words. You have 7 minutes.

Heather: How do you feel about the fact that none of our teachers is native? You: I would feel happy because the teacher who isn’t native can explain me the things I don’t understand in Spanish. However, I would like have a native teacher too. It would be the perfect combination and I would feel very happy.

NEW STUDENT FORM Please tell us the days and times you can come, as well as topics you would like to discuss.

Hello, my name is Juan. I would like to have classes on Wednesdays and Fridays in the morning from 9 to 11 am and Thursdays for the disccuss.

PART 3

PART 4 Comentado [1]: discussion

You are studying German in the ‘Conversational German Course’. After your last lesson you saw the notice below:

Comentado [4]: to have

I am writing in relation with the previous e-mail and I want to show you my disagreement about the change the time of the course class that I am doing in German to take effect from next week.

Dear students, We are sorry to inform you that from next week we need to change the time of the lessons: now they will be held every Thursday and Friday from 15.00 to 18.00.

I have been studying with you for two weeks and I feel It is unacceptable change the time of the lessons so soon after signing up.

If you have any comments or suggestions, please feel free to email us at [email protected]

I would like to suggest several alternatives: 1. First of all, I believe that If you have to change the time of the lessons, you should give me a discount on my next bill. 2. Secondly, If you do not want to give me a discount on my next bill, you would offer one day a week free class.

Write an e-mail to a fellow-student explaining what has happened. Write your feelings about the message you received and suggest possible alternatives. Write about 50 words. You have 10 minutes.

Hello Sara, What do you think about the change the time of the course class that I am doing in German?? I can’t believe they are going to change the time of the lessons every Thursday and Friday. If you ask me, they should offer me more hours of course if they plan to change the time of the lessons. I just signing up and already a change the time of the lesson.

Now, write an email to the language school management, showing your disagreement with the situation and asking for solutions and compensations. Write about 120-150 words. You have 20 minutes. Dear Sir or Madam

I look to forward hearing back from you If my recommendation are acceptable if not, I will look at other German course offers. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully. Comentado [5]: ??? Comentado [6]: I've just signed Comentado [7]: in order to

Juan

Comentado [8]: could/should Comentado [9]: a free class one day

Comentado [10]: loook forward to Comentado [11]: is

WRITING UNIT 8

PART 3

PART 1 Fill in the form (3 minutes)

MULTICULTURAL COURSE - REGISTRATION FORM Username Date of Birth (day month year) City / Town / Village

Juan Perez 03rd July 1990

Nathan: Hello! Are you a new member? I joined this course a few weeks ago because I was interested in meeting new people from other cultures. Why did you join?

Malaga

1. culture [Reasons to learn about traditions from other countries]

You are a new member in the ‘Multicultural Course’ and you are in the chat room. You are talking to Nick, an old member in this course. Talk to him using complete sentences. Use 30 to 40 words per answer. You have 10 minutes.

You: Hello Nathan, nice to meet you! I have joined here because I would like to know how is the culture of other countries and know a little more about them. I love learning this because I like.

2. believes 3. ethics

PART 2 You have enrolled a ‘Multicultural Course’, where you will learn new things about other cultures as well as meet new people from many parts of the world. Fill in the form with complete sentences. Use 20-30 words. You have 7 minutes.

Nathan: What do you think about the contents and design of the course? You: I think that the contents are good although there should be more specific content. However, the design of the course is nice but from my point of view it could be improved a little more.

NEW MEMBER FORM Please, introduce yourself and explain why you are interested in learning about new cultures.

Hello, my name is Juan Antonio. I’m twenty-five years old. Because it’s interesting to learn about those who are different from you. It’s interesting to know about other cultures.

Nathan: How do you feel about the fact that no meetings are going to be held next month? You: This month I’m going to be very occupied, so I don’t care but the next month I would have two meetings, one the beginning and another one the end to give us the information

PART 4 You are a member of ‘Multicultural Course’. After your last visit to the webpage you saw the notice below: Dear members, We are sorry to inform you that next month’s meeting has been cancelled due to the organisational problems with our room. If you have any comments or suggestions, please feel free to email us at [email protected]

Now,write an email to the course's manager,showing your disagreement with the situation and asking for solutions. Write about 120-150 words. You have 20 minutes. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in relation with the previous e-mail and I want to show you my disagreement about the cancelled meetings to take effect from next months. I signed up for the course three weeks ago and I feel it is unacceptable to meeting has been cancelled so soon after signing up. I would like to suggest two alternatives: 1. The first alternative is that I disagree because I have joined here because you offer us meetings every month but it is not true. 2. The second alternative is that may I suggest possible alternatives like doing online meeting or two meeting in April. In addition, I would like to have further information about when the next meetings will be held.

Write an e-mail to a fellow-member explaining what has happened. Write your feelings about the message you received and suggest possible alternatives. Write about 50 words. You have 10 minutes.

I look forward to hearing back from you if my recommendations is acceptable if not, I will look at other course offers. Thank you for your attention.

Hi Cristina, I’m really brassed off about the Multicultural Course. I have just received an email which says that next month’s meeting has been cancelled too. Then, I don’t know when we’ll have it. We might suggest that they do realize the meetings in April or online. What do you think about this proposal? Juan

Yours faithfully, Juan.